So, Joram had a brilliant idea, and kylian decided to go for it. Well I have to say, the idea is quite brilliant indeed. So I'll try to make it happen. Though I'll never top kylian, 'cause he's that good. :)
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There is something about him.. something that worries me. The expression on his face is barbaric. He is the only one at the chaotic platform that's not racing against time. He seems to enjoy the pouring rain, unlike everyone else. As I glance at his pale face he lights up a cigarette. On his cheek there's a remarkably large scar, one that confirms me he's not a nice guy. I never knew scars could warn me for something like that, but apparently, they can.
The rain starts to overrule the sound of rushing footsteps, and apparently the guy decides to head inside for some shelter. This could be the sign of him actually being human, but something still tells me to keep watching him. But all these people around me make it hard for me to keep track of him. I decide to walk up the stairs in the back corner.
As I look down on the massive crowd, I notice him right away. Right below me he stares at me, with a rather terrifying grin. I shiver. His hand still holding the cigarette he decides to ignore the no smoking sign. But at this point there's no time to worry about his disobedience, because the location of his other hand is what I'm really anxious about. What is it he's reaching for inside of his leather jacket? Should I attempt to do something now, even though I can't move? Before I can even try, I lose sight of him. That can't be good.
And as I'm nailed to the ground, the unbearing sound of a gunshot echoes through the main hall. Someone just died.
(I realize I didn't quite mention a new event, but I realized that it already took me quite some time to write this, so I guess you'll just have to live with that fact. (: )
It doesn't matter it isn't not a whole new event. Actually, it's quite interesting to read those events from another point of view.
ReplyDeleteMy thoughts exactly! (:
ReplyDeleteHaha, great minds think alike. ;)
ReplyDeleteI can already sense this is evolving into a story of epic proportions.
ReplyDeleteWhy do you say you didn't mention a new event? You described the potential assassin, someone who is pretty much a key-figure i reckon. So you did introduce a new character, two in fact if you count the narrator in, and you did it a in very interesting way to top things off :]
ReplyDeleteYeah well you have point! :) I just thought that it may be difficult to come up with something new.. but hey, that's up to you right!
ReplyDeleteI'm very curious to find out what'll happen next. :]]